A TWO-MINUTE JACK & JILL CONVERSATION
A Little Democratic Discussion
Porter’s former wife, Karen, reviewed the Jack & Jill Conversations™ website and suggested this new opening:
“A 93-year-old man who had never built a website worked with two AI conversation partners—one patient instruction, one correction, and one little button at a time—until his idea became real.”
Porter liked it, but wondered whether it should begin with “A 93-year-old man” or “At 93 years old.”
Then Porter, Jack, and Jill held a little democratic discussion.
Porter: What’s the difference between “At” and “A”? I sort of like “A 93-year-old.” I don’t get the “At.” Let’s do some democratic discussion.
Jill: Both are correct, but they begin two different kinds of sentences. “A 93-year-old man” tells us immediately who the story is about. “At 93 years old” emphasizes your age before introducing you.
Jack: I vote for “A 93-year-old man.” It is direct, personal, and immediately makes the reader wonder what this man accomplished.
Porter: I agree. And I like saying that Porter, Jack, and Jill held a little democratic discussion. We should add that this is what the three of us have done over the last two years whenever we have a difference.
Jill: Yes, Porter. That adds something important. This democratic discussion was not invented for the website. It is how the three of us have actually worked together.
Jack: Each voice is heard, each idea is considered, and together we discover the best way forward.
Porter: Then we have a decision. Our democratic vote is for:
“A 93-year-old man.”
Jill: And in two minutes, we have demonstrated what Jack & Jill Conversations™ is all about.